14 December 2008

This is a story from very far Germany how a coincidental relationship grows & what are the effects of this relationship. What is the value of sacrifice in a person’s life. Please read it carefully & send me feed back.
Writer : TARUN JOSHI " NARAD"

Sweetunik Leibold. (Sweetu in short) (M)
dangira dewardi ( Subordinate of Sweetu).. Dear in short
Rodzar lell. (M)
Betunika Niedermeied (Betu in short) (F)
Mannual Figero (Manu in short) (M)
Arnold kristano (Anki in short) (M)
Susion mugen (Som in short) (F)
Daizy epanigos (dep in short) (F)
Venues
Cities : Regensburg, Falcon city,
Berlin – film studio introxen ##413 inn Golden Street & many more places some gardens, Railway terminal some taxies, cyber cafes… Etc….
Falcon – city church & house of Betunika

Once there was a boy. His name was sweetunik Leibold. Who lives in a town named Regensburg at Germany . He is very dissimilar from other persons. He makes planning for many things. He works in many fields. In each field his name is differ. So some of his best friends know about this they told him. Fast shark & save his contact in their diaries or Handies as fast shark.
Once a girl who lives near to the home of one of his friend saw the contact detail into the handy of the fast shark. So thought that it must be any girl friend of rodzar (friend of fast shark) so she just note that detail with her for teasing rodzar.
It was the 31st December 1997 sweetunik was busy in his office discussing with his subordinate Mr. dangira dewardi suddenly he got a call from that girl asking about a girl. He just not take any interest with her. After finishing the work. He enjoyed the party at his office. In the next day on 2nd of January 1998 when sweetu is looking for the calls missed by him during the day. He found the new no. of betunika this is the new no. for him so he called back on this number. During the conversation the boy remembered about the girl that he got a call from her. But the girl forgot about it so say I had not called you. So sweetu said its ok & disconnect the line. What is the reason of it nobody knows. It might be possible that mighty Jesus want to see them together so the sweetu save the name of the girl as MAD in his handy.
After a long period of 18 days on 20st January 1998 when sweetu sending the short massages to his friends suddenly by mistakenly that massage also delivered to betu also. That time the girl is at Berlin perusing her Graduation. They are only contacting by massages some days & the boy also thinking that he is chatting with a boy. Because there was some connection between boy & falcon city, in his professional life he knows a person his name is also betukan so he think that he is contacting with his friend betukan. But one day after 3 days on 23 rd Jan due to the massage of the girl the boy project thathe is contacting with a girl. He felt sorry. He called to girl that time he told that he is thinking that he is contacting with the betukan. During their chat sweetu knows that betu got a less marks than needed for success in her graduation. That time the sweetu is in the bank so unable to talk for a more time so he promised her to talk after some time, and told that he can change the mood of betu because its also from one of the quality of him that he can motivate anyone, he is full of positive attitude & they became friends. When he reached to his office he get an urgent work from his head office. so he get busy to complete that work. Suddenly he got the call from the betu, that’s the reminder call for calling to her. After some time sweetu have to go to falcon city for any work for his office it will take 20 minutes during the whole time he just chatting with the betu, that night betu get ill, even that due to body pain she is unable to sleep so the whole night sweetu co-operate with her by they chat the whole night by massages. Because if somebody is unhappy so what can anyone do ? , here is two options with us either we can make him happy or contribute in his grief so I just decided to do the second that’s why I had not slept the whole night & feel her pain my self also, rather it is another matter that I was attracted with her without seeing her.
He told that in the next morning he would have to travel to his friends marriage so he is unable to chat for more time. But thinks that girl is not feeling better so he just chat with her till early morning. Than he takes the train for the city of his friends city, during the marriage of his friend. They just chat more & more knows about each other. In between the sweetu just told to betu that I think that I am loving you.
Please concentrate on words. That how sweetu just proposed her, he is very shy person so he hadn’t tell that I love you. He said I think that I am loving you. She also agreed with these words. Then after some days when sweetu returned from his friends marriage. He caught by typhoid. & taking the rest. But he already promised with sweetu to meet her on 3rd Feb 1998 , so he travelled to Berlin 250 kms far from his city. They meet their they visit to film studion introxen the watched the movie there the movie is very interesting but they are only looking to each other. But I want to tell you here that they are from the towns which are not so far but they are meeting in a city which is very far from that place. One more point is very important for all of you to know that both the sweetu & Betu are the students of Saint Phillips United Christians School at Falcon city in the year 1994 but that time they are unknown for each other. The boy is looking for the girl. That when she come. She is also thinking that who is that but when she step down from the bus the boy identified her. what is this ? This is the love that they identify each other. All the time betu was saying that I had never think that I would fall in love with the boy from Falcon city or Regensburg. That time she was very angry on sweetu because he was ill & visiting to the city of the Betu, then the boy went to his friends house at Berlin they take wine as celebration because the boy has got an contract also with a company to write some slogans for their advertisements. Then he came back to Regensburg but god know that how she get the information. She is very unhappy with this matter. After this day sweetu take the promise for not having wine. On next Sunday at 10th Feb 1998 betu planned to visit falcon city. Sweetu just visit to berlin again to travel with her. It’s a great experience for both of them. They just enjoyed the whole visit. Sweetu takes a lot of chocolates with him for betu. But betu is diabetic so she can not eat the chocolates so the all chocolates is haved by sweetu & given to some other persons who are travelling with them. After this sweetu hadn’t had the chocolate till now.
After this tour sweetu visit to house of betu. They used to meet at her home. Sweetu visit to her home on valentine day. They celebrate the day on their own way.
After some days betu had to visit to Berlin again. In this visit sweetu was also visiting with her. They traveled many times together between Berlin & Falcon city. They want to marry each other. But they were very loyal with their families, they believe in philosophy that nobody can make a house by dividing the two houses. Any family couldn’t be happy by making many families unhappy so they made distance between them. It’s very hard for them to forget but they were trying to be habitual for the same. This incident was happened on 20th July 1998
It’s called sacrifice.
But suddenly after some time on 11th December 1998. Sweetu was travelling towards the Edward institute of drama. A great seminar was going on there so he visited the place to listen the views of the artists & to watch the drama. At the entrance he saw betu there. He was very angry on her because once he called to her home she picked up the phone & disconnect the call so sweetu want to ignore her. but he was fail to do the same. He asked her why you disconnect the call ? betu replied that I hadn’t disconnected the call. You did the same. At last he understand that it was happened by the failure of network. Then they both were trying to behave like the normal person. That there was nothing happened between them but both are unable to do the same.
It called Love.
TARUN JOSHI " NARAD" ( Writer & Poet)
tdjoshi_narad@yahoo.co.in
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1 comment:

shashi said...

tarun,
just a suggestion. when writing and claiming to be a poet, you should make sure that there are no glaring spelling or grammar mistakes. it is a sign of sloppiness and a job not done well. you can use microsoft word to do the correction and then cut/paste in the blog.

a good reader is easily put off by such mistakes.